Post by togamau on Feb 8, 2010 23:13:04 GMT -5
If I were to complain about anything, I'd say that the names of some cities and locations are a mite... cliche'. I could elaborate more on that after I get a better look at the site. Another thing is a number of grammatical and spelling problems in the descriptions of some places. An example would be that mechafield city is "most advanced architecturally the any other city" I suggest you rewrite that as either "most architecturally advanced of all cities" or "is more architecturally advanced than any other city". I'll tell you more if I see anything else, kay?